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Delusions

The silence engulfs me
The only sound I hear is the one in my head
Delusions beyond sanity
I listened so silently
As the yelling grew louder
Closer
More pronounced
Then I was awake

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  1. Date: 7/24/2010 4:28:00 PM

    A beautiful write with a sad tone.

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 9:00:00 AM

    VERY GOOD! I really enjoyed this

  1. Date: 11/6/2009 9:24:00 AM

    Wonderful verse, Tumelo, keep on writing in your own unique style ... don't know if u are new to Poetry Soup but be encouraged .. everyone here is terrific and very helpful... glad u enjoyed my Imagine poem today... try entering the contests posted by members to get a broader view of the site.. happy writing... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire.. check out his Daffy Definitions.. its fun.. come join..

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 9:02:00 AM

    Pretty good poetry.