Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

Living Waters

Curtain white cool bright
Water drapes cascade delight
Living waters fall











Entered into Raul's contest, Rhythm of the Falls

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 6/8/2010 7:07:00 AM

    very nice rhyming verse..I love water falls. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 6:07:00 PM

    I've always wondered what it would be like to be under a waterfall. The sound would be awesome and I agree full of life. Good write Leon

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 2:57:00 PM

    Reminds me of my trip to Niagra Falls. Nice Peace Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 4:47:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery. I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 2:00:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest. This Haiku is very descriptive. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:11:00 PM

    I just now found your Haiku...It's so beautiful...Good luck in the contest...Marty

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 10:08:00 AM

    Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Leon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 8:15:00 AM

    Very beautiful..i think its a winner. Bg

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 11:13:00 PM

    Thanks for supporting my contest Leon...Raul

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 3:16:00 PM

    Quite a beautiful interpretation of the photo Raul posted, Leon! Much luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn