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The Love of "Fall"

F alling in love with Winter; she’s ice cold dressed in snow white lace 
A ll the while dating Summer, who’s still sizzling hot
L ove affairs bruised with revengeful reds, oppressed oranges, and yelling yellows
L eaving Summer with a promise to one day rekindle their love

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  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:21:00 PM

    Abe, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 7:29:00 PM

    Nice poem....great explanation for every letter in the topic:)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:42:00 AM

    Looking forward, wistfully. Love this one, Abe. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:23:00 AM

    Loved it

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 5:15:00 PM

    A short, but very sweetly descriptive acrostic. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 11:52:00 AM

    Abe, i have to admit this is such a delight to read. It's certainly my favourite. Many congratulations on your win in Jared's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 7:20:00 PM

    Congrats Abe on your HM in the Acrostic contest with a great write... luv the flow.. Summer best line for me ..sizzling hot... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 5:36:00 PM

    Very creative Abe. Nice imagery. Telling Fall's story from both ends - very creative. Joe

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 2:18:00 PM

    Hey, very nice. YOu went for the personification same as I did in this contest. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 10:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest Abe. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 3:15:00 AM

    Love this one quite a write. I love all the emotion that Fall has expressed here. Keep the colorful and expressive pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 8:25:00 AM

    This is such a lovely Acrostic, Abe! Your imagery is wonderful and the sentiment is beautiful! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 7:27:00 AM

    I love the third line! Nice Acrostic, Abe. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 7:24:00 AM

    Abe! This is a magnificent Acrosctic personification that is going straight to my favorite list. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:44:00 AM

    wow that is awsome!!! wow speechless!!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 5:49:00 AM

    Nice lines, Abe, especially line one. Thanks for your comments. Gert

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 11:14:00 PM

    Clever acrostic, Summer is always hot. Nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 6:17:00 PM

    Quite witty, and unique, this imagery as an affair.Smile, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 2:49:00 PM

    A bit of the romance twist to the changing seasons!! Loved this! :) ~ Charming poem, Abe!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 2:33:00 PM

    Beautiful Acrostic Abe, lovely images in your lovely words >> James

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 2:13:00 PM

    Magnificent write, Abe, filled with color and emotion! When is your book coming out? Please post a blog when it does. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 2:12:00 PM

    Thank you for sharing this awesome Acrostic with us today Abe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 1:18:00 PM

    so wonderfully presented and i love the last verse..Leaving Summer with a promise to one day rekindle their love..What a beauty Abe-to my favs..-Charma

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 1:15:00 PM

    NICE