Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

A Brand New Day !

A Brand New Day!


  Vanishing night.chirping chicks
  Morning dews,glittering grass
  Walking dogs ,men and women 
                                                                                         
                   
  Smoking chimneys,flying planes
  Peeping sun,laughing children
  Singing birds,running cars
                                
  Gentle breeze,chilling mind
  Come alive,setting tone
  Welcome all,brand new day!

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 10/27/2009 6:09:00 AM

    How awe inspiring Chacko ... what a gift for descrition u have and the crisp wording... keep on going ... and thankxxx for your wonderful comments regarding my poetry.. I love P.S. and all the talented and gifted poets who contribute to expand our horizons and bring new things to the table of writing... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 6:22:00 PM

    yes, Chacko! I love the freshness of this poem! brings the title full circle!... jim

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 5:59:00 AM

    Now Chacko this is beautiful. Thank you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 6:52:00 PM

    Lovely imagery, Chacko. Greeting a "Brand New Day" is always such a refreshing feeling. Very nice write! Love, Carolyn