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Dishonesty

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Dishonesty

Into all the truth you bathe in, lovers, 
Will drip the tiniest drop of deceit; 

Whether it be just small dark water that dissolves 
Neutralised 
In the Crystal stream, 

Whether it be venom that turns the 
Pure flow sour and shows up your one blue 
Vein of deception, 

Only time will tell, and that time, 
Believe me, 
Can oppress as much as lies. 

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  1. Date: 10/11/2009 10:46:00 AM
    Yes in the best of relationships some rain will fall and with it some hurt. Nicley put idea. Keep writing. Sara