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Delicate Power

Silky mane glistens
Majestic blue cascading
Delicate Power














**Entry for Raul Moreno's Rhythm of the Falls Contest

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  1. Date: 5/29/2010 8:47:00 PM

    another beauty, gosh i have to keep going back farther and farther to find one of yours I've not commented to already!!

  1. Date: 1/2/2010 9:18:00 AM

    This is really nice--I like how you used "mane" to describe the falls, pretty unique--also like the contrast of "delicate power" enjoyed reading this :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2009 6:52:00 PM

    regal entry! I must say! Kimberly, transcends the contest! jim

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 9:43:00 AM

    Amazing Haiku Lady, Sincerely, love, Moses

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 1:25:00 PM

    Love this write!

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 1:17:00 PM

    Beautiful Haiku Kimberly, best of luck in Raul's contest >> James

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 11:51:00 AM

    Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. I really like the opening line. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 10/10/2009 10:57:00 PM

    This is nice...Good luck on the contest...Marty