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Breakfast at Timmy’s

My chicken noodle, smile to each memory
Review each frown with aversion and ignorance
Bliss you are, for God has blessed me as your kin
For you, the number one seems twice the company

Solemn moments as your tears race – no doubt
No doubting that it is I who has bought box of tissues
Crash onto me, I as cushions lay comfortably
Crash onto me, I as philosophy raise your chin

Never shall a moment be flown into the ocean
For my eternal lake of reminisces accompanies you
Like a shadow with no being, I am redundant to follow
Carpe Diem, seize thy day with such a beautiful creation.

Sing along with incoherent words – as if we really know…
Grasp each moment with a sense of unrealistic joy
Each morning rises with the sun as you
I praise not for one, yet two suns, instead of a moon – everlasting.

My chicken noodle, smile to each memory
Another day passes with deep sleep from last sundown
I awake in the amidst of your rejoicing shadow with no mourn
And I said “Hey sis, what about – what about”

Breakfast at Timmy’s.

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  1. Date: 11/14/2009 4:59:00 AM

    Very descriptive write. Sounds like a great visit with a relative and friend combined. Keep the pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 4:17:00 PM

    a pleasure to read this sweet lovely writing..bringing sweet memories--Charma

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 4:17:00 PM

    a pleasure to read this sweet lovely writing..bringing sweet memories--Charma

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 1:31:00 AM

    Nice work Sami .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 8:40:00 AM

    I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you Sami. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/10/2009 2:59:00 PM

    Creative perspective with interesting imagery. I really like the optimistic 14th line. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

  1. Date: 10/10/2009 1:48:00 PM

    How wonderfully you convey these memories of your beloved sister, Sami. And I adore the way you call her your "chicken noodle." TLC for the heart and soul in this great write! Love, Carolyn