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Mountain of Regrets

As large boulders weep,
Tears stream down sharp cheeks of stone:
Sobbing precipice.

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  1. Date: 10/8/2009 12:16:00 PM

    WOOOOOO W!!! Excellent! Terrific!! This one goes to my favs! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 11:25:00 AM

    Good words friend.....I like this one a lot.....:JP]

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 2:58:00 AM

    Nicely done, Raul. It is weeping because it knows it is the end. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 7:01:00 PM

    this is one of my favorite haikus. a clever piece indeed!!!!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 5:51:00 PM

    I somehow missed this one today but found it tonight. I really love all your work. Thanks for everything. Marty

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 1:57:00 PM

    Scaling Haiku Raul >> James

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 12:46:00 PM

    TIGHT! Very cool man and I love it that you're doin a conest for that picture......

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 10:00:00 AM

    Thank you Raul for being here and sharing your poetry with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 8:40:00 AM

    This is a great haiku nice personification

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 8:11:00 AM

    A emotional piece of nature and all the thoughts it brings to one's heart. Nice one! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 5:08:00 AM

    a vivid picture you have created, wonderfully done :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 1:49:00 AM

    a great applause given for this outrageously well done haiku!

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 11:38:00 PM

    A waterfall of words Raul.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome blog comments today

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 10:25:00 PM

    i can picture the scene,tears streaming down the rocky mountains on cold sharp cheeks,in regrets and sobs-this Haiku another gem,another favs.you've got us mused today..i can nearly feel a sad senryu in this Haiku of regrets..excellent work Raul--Charma