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Heaven and Hell

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Heaven and Hell

You were just a fairy tale
a dream that sometimes felt so real
a secret I kept safely locked away
You were there and I was here
and never would I ever dare
that is until one very crazy day
Then all at once it hit me
like nothing else I've ever known
I have tried to calm this storm
but since then it has grown
and I have tried to tame this beast
but I've been overthrown
and know I'm ready to admit
what I have always known
You're a dream that's oh so real
and I love how you make me feel
and this feels something like a dream come true
I could never stay away from you

Caught between Heaven and Hell
I've been captured by your spell
please show me all the magic you can make
And when my body cries for you
there is nothing I won't do
and what you want to give me I will take
Since this whole thing started
you haven't seen the tears I've cried
but I know you've seen me tremble
and you know how hard I've tried
You've watched me struggle with myself
then try to run and hide
You've watched me come right back again
and swallow all my pride
I've been weak more times than strong
but whether this is right or wrong
you must know the same thing that I do
I could never walk away from you

I don't know where this will go
and I don't really need to know
I just know I need you close to me
You said you'd always be my friend
and I will trust you to the end
but don't forget you are my fantasy
I'm so wrapped up in desire
sometimes it takes my breath away
sometimes it seems so many things
are standing in our way
and sometimes I can't tell you
all the things I need to say
but then you take me in your arms
and everything's okay
With your love I am set free
you know you mean the world to me
and I would go through Hell to be with you
because I am in Heaven when I do 




Inspired by John Hecks' Love Is In The Air contest

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  1. Date: 10/9/2009 8:38:00 PM
    Robin, this is fantastic, and will surely place high in the contest. You express such passion with this piece, I could feel your inner turmoil. Very well done! Hugs, Donna

    Pascoe Avatar Alycia Pascoe
    Date: 10/28/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This poem is fantastic. I tried commenting on it but it won't let me.
  1. Date: 10/9/2009 7:49:00 AM
    Wow! Robin, this lyrical poem flows freely from place to place grounded upon paths of love together grown. And beautifully carries the reader along for a peek at love's gifts. Good luck in John's contest. xoxoxox Dane

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 2:32:00 PM
    i love this; it's flawless. beautiful job :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 7:11:00 AM
    Robin.thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 7:06:00 PM
    Thanks for your comments on my poem "Paper Dreams". I always enjoy reading your poetry. Randy

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 12:49:00 AM
    AWESOME! lOVE, LAINIE

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 11:50:00 PM
    Best wishes with this beautiful poem Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 10:01:00 PM
    Beautifully penned Robin, best of luck in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 4:19:00 PM
    Awesome write Robin, the poet's passion leaks into each word and verse. The heart was open to the mind in this Lyric. A very moving and rewarding poem for the reader to explore. Thanks so much for your comments toeay. Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 1:48:00 PM
    Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. The emotion comes through your words. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 1:14:00 PM
    yes i agree very moving poem, thanks for your comments on my works.

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 12:00:00 PM
    Oh, Robin, this is so moving! The reader can feel the power of love in each line. And I have heard it said that you "have to go through hell before you get to heaven." Hopefully, the moments of ecstasy will far outweigh the periods of pain. You have such a beautiful heart and it shines in this write! Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 11:54:00 AM
    Exceptional write Robin, pure quality >> James

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 10:25:00 AM
    Nicely done. I really like the last four lines. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 9:39:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry today. Thank you Robin. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol