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  1. Date: 6/18/2010 11:36:00 PM
    Very cool one!

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 5:09:00 PM
    Interesting use of this concise form. Kind of playful feel. Has me smiling. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 1:06:00 PM
    nicely penned, welcome to the soup, keep sharing.

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 8:52:00 PM
    Nice work, the middle line stood out for me...Raul

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 8:27:00 PM
    Thanks for this beautiful Haiku...Marty