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YOU...

If you do not made of gold
Why do I preserve you
If you are not God
Why do I praise you
If you are not a flower
Why do I adore you

I have a weakness
When I glance at your beauty
I have a weakness
When I see you smile
I have a weakness 
When I saw you walked by

You are a beautiful flower
That has just blossom
A new treasure
That have just been discover
A new falling star
In my universe


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  1. Date: 2/15/2010 10:57:00 AM

    wow this is great if you were going to enter it in the i love you because contest then do it cuz this is great i have been rading them and it's the best i've read so far.....wait dont enter,or i'll never win! lol i loved it tho beautifully written and carefully! =)

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 3:58:00 AM

    This is a beautiful piece....wonderful sentiments....

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 11:48:00 AM

    Nicely done passionate poem. Love the comparisons. Keep writing. Sara