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Trick or Treat? (Shape Poetry)

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Trick or Treat? (Shape Poetry)

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                                                i could have been a pie
                                            but you turned me into a face
                                          with jagged teeth and evil eyes
                                        that makes /\  the  /\ children cry
                                        they scream     /\  as  they run by 
                                        afraid they might look in my eyes       
                                         and see the  devil  there and die
                                         but I'm just /\/\/\/\ a pumpkin
                                               in a Halloween disguise



                                                 Written October 1, 2009

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  1. Date: 10/9/2009 4:19:00 PM
    I say it Concrete hahahahaha hoowllll and good for my contest. I poem about a pumpkin that looks like a pumpkin CONCRETE> Gotcha! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 8:13:00 AM
    This is such a wonderful display of your talents, Lainie! You did a beautiful job with this shape! Love Robin

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 10:09:00 PM
    I love how you cleverly crafted this tricky treat, Lanie! Muuaahahaha! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 4:19:00 PM
    nicley penned, funny, I like the shape too.

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 8:20:00 PM
    Brilliantly written and very cute poem Elaine, good job. Thanks for sharing, God bless, Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 6:20:00 AM
    ~~~Magnificent~~~ Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 7:30:00 PM
    exellent imagination....................kate

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 7:03:00 PM
    Very cool, Elaine.

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 5:55:00 PM
    So creative, cute and clever!! How fun is this one?!!!! ~ Great job!~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 5:51:00 PM
    What a cleaver way of putting it, I really like it...Karla