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She Says: Verse 1

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She Says: Verse 1

She says "You don't know me."
But I don't think it's true,
I've always tried to see,
And I've more than a clue,

She says "Well, then prove it."
So I try to my best,
But when she tells me I'm wrong,
It's like a stake through my chest,

She says "You don't care."
I just don't understand,
I really do care,
I can't just disband,

She says "You don't know me."
But I hope that she's wrong,
Perhaps I do know her,
Perhaps I have all along.

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  1. Date: 10/21/2009 9:24:00 AM
    If it's not working..it's not working...no ones fault. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 12:44:00 PM
    Interesting idea here. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 12:38:00 PM
    wonderfull write.