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Journey of Dreams

I 
venture
Into art,
Casting myself,
I am focused with no destination.



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For Brian's FIVE & TWENTY contest

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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 10/24/2009 5:10:00 AM
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    Congratulations, Raul, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest. Excellent write! I particularly like the last line. I do believe that creativity lives there...focused without the limits of destination. I love it! Lovingly, Dane Ann

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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 10/16/2009 7:39:00 PM
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    congrats on the BIG win!!
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    Veronica Joseph
    Date: 10/14/2009 11:56:00 AM
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    this is fabulous - I got a chill because I KNOW HOW THAT FEELS! but I could not put it into words. into my faves
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    Abe Lopez
    Date: 10/13/2009 8:03:00 AM
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    congrats on your success it is well deserved, your are a great poet.......
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    Andrew Crisci
    Date: 10/13/2009 6:34:00 AM
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    Hi, raul. Congratulations on your first win! Your tetractys is so inspiring and thought-provoking. I wish continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.

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    Kelly Zakerski
    Date: 10/12/2009 2:59:00 AM
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    CONGRATULATIONS on winning Brian's contest - this is an awesome poem and you definitely inspire me. Thank you for all of your kind words as well. Love, Kelly
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    Brandee Augustus
    Date: 10/11/2009 9:46:00 AM
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    That is really one of the best ways to look at life. I think when we have our minds set on exactly what we want our actions to produce, we can miss out on the pleasant surprises and opportunities God puts in our way. Congratulations on your first place win!
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    Adell Foster
    Date: 10/10/2009 9:23:00 PM
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    Congrats Raul on a well deserved win. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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    cecil hickman
    Date: 10/9/2009 9:16:00 PM
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    Congratulation on your winning poem,,definitely a cherishable piece of art and poetry wrapped together with much grace and style brialliantly,,,Blessings..Cecil
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 10/9/2009 9:00:00 PM
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    : ) Another First Place!!! Congratulations, my friend! Ruben.
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    Donna Golden
    Date: 10/9/2009 8:34:00 PM
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    Congratulations, Raul! You have written a brillian piece here. No suprise you won first place! Hugs, Donna
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/9/2009 7:36:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your first place win Raul. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 10/9/2009 7:26:00 AM
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    Hooray for you Raul!! This wonderful poem a winner...so well deserved ..this twist of words!! Love, Carrie
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    Robin L. Gass
    Date: 10/9/2009 4:07:00 AM
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    Congratulation on your first place win, Raul! This is a beautiful glimpse into your artistic heart! Love, Robin
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 10/9/2009 4:03:00 AM
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    congrats on the BIG win!!!! I like the play on words!!
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 10/9/2009 2:34:00 AM
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    Wow, I'm honored! Thanks Brian...Raul

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    Elaine George
    Date: 10/9/2009 2:26:00 AM
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    Dear Raul, Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest. Truly a masterpiece. Love, lainie
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 10/9/2009 12:52:00 AM
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    Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.( could you soupmail me a forwarding address )
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    Adell Foster
    Date: 10/7/2009 4:12:00 PM
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    This is a very well written tetracyts read, much continued success in your journeying my friend and Best wishes with Brian's Contest :-) ~ Always, Adell
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    Yoni Dvorkis
    Date: 10/4/2009 6:00:00 PM
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    love the last line Raul. no destination necessary, journey counts for everything:) thanks for sharing.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/3/2009 9:34:00 AM
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    Congratulations on making the hot poems list. Sara
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    Elaine George
    Date: 10/2/2009 8:20:00 PM
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    Profound and beautiful. Good luck in Brian's contest, dear Raul. Love, Lainie
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    Kate W
    Date: 10/1/2009 8:16:00 PM
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    sometimes it best that we adventure with out direction...................kate
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 10/1/2009 8:03:00 PM
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    And it's going to my favs!

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    Ruben O.
    Date: 10/1/2009 8:03:00 PM
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    A masterpiece! You're very inspired lately! You're going at 80 miles of talent per hour! : ) Good luck on Brian's Contest...Another win! Ruben.
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 10/1/2009 11:49:00 AM
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    Thank you Raul for your comments. This is a great entry for the contest. Love, Joyce
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 10/1/2009 8:51:00 AM
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    A pensive and thoughtful entry to Brian' contest!! Well done! Good luck Raul... and many thanks for placing my poem in your Solace in Nature contest! You had such wonderful entries....I am honored to be among them! Love, Carrie
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    Abe Lopez
    Date: 10/1/2009 8:35:00 AM
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    thats the beauty of the journey.......even if there is a destination there is much to be exploered along the way.... very nice!(soup mail....)
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/1/2009 6:18:00 AM
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    excellent really really loved it..(that's 2 reallys ;) You have mail! Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/1/2009 4:56:00 AM
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    Wishing you the best in Brian's contest. Love, Carol
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