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Journey of Dreams

I 
venture
Into art,
Casting myself,
I am focused with no destination.



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For Brian's FIVE & TWENTY contest

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  1. Date: 10/24/2009 5:10:00 AM

    Congratulations, Raul, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest. Excellent write! I particularly like the last line. I do believe that creativity lives there...focused without the limits of destination. I love it! Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:39:00 PM

    congrats on the BIG win!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:56:00 AM

    this is fabulous - I got a chill because I KNOW HOW THAT FEELS! but I could not put it into words. into my faves

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 8:03:00 AM

    congrats on your success it is well deserved, your are a great poet.......

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 6:34:00 AM

    Hi, raul. Congratulations on your first win! Your tetractys is so inspiring and thought-provoking. I wish continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 2:59:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS on winning Brian's contest - this is an awesome poem and you definitely inspire me. Thank you for all of your kind words as well. Love, Kelly

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 9:46:00 AM

    That is really one of the best ways to look at life. I think when we have our minds set on exactly what we want our actions to produce, we can miss out on the pleasant surprises and opportunities God puts in our way. Congratulations on your first place win!

  1. Date: 10/10/2009 9:23:00 PM

    Congrats Raul on a well deserved win. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 9:16:00 PM

    Congratulation on your winning poem,,definitely a cherishable piece of art and poetry wrapped together with much grace and style brialliantly,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 9:00:00 PM

    : ) Another First Place!!! Congratulations, my friend! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 8:34:00 PM

    Congratulations, Raul! You have written a brillian piece here. No suprise you won first place! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 7:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place win Raul. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 7:26:00 AM

    Hooray for you Raul!! This wonderful poem a winner...so well deserved ..this twist of words!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 4:07:00 AM

    Congratulation on your first place win, Raul! This is a beautiful glimpse into your artistic heart! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 4:03:00 AM

    congrats on the BIG win!!!! I like the play on words!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 2:34:00 AM

    Wow, I'm honored! Thanks Brian...Raul

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 2:26:00 AM

    Dear Raul, Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest. Truly a masterpiece. Love, lainie

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 12:52:00 AM

    Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.( could you soupmail me a forwarding address )

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 4:12:00 PM

    This is a very well written tetracyts read, much continued success in your journeying my friend and Best wishes with Brian's Contest :-) ~ Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 6:00:00 PM

    love the last line Raul. no destination necessary, journey counts for everything:) thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 9:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on making the hot poems list. Sara

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 8:20:00 PM

    Profound and beautiful. Good luck in Brian's contest, dear Raul. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 8:16:00 PM

    sometimes it best that we adventure with out direction...................kate

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 8:03:00 PM

    And it's going to my favs!

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 8:03:00 PM

    A masterpiece! You're very inspired lately! You're going at 80 miles of talent per hour! : ) Good luck on Brian's Contest...Another win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 11:49:00 AM

    Thank you Raul for your comments. This is a great entry for the contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 8:51:00 AM

    A pensive and thoughtful entry to Brian' contest!! Well done! Good luck Raul... and many thanks for placing my poem in your Solace in Nature contest! You had such wonderful entries....I am honored to be among them! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 8:35:00 AM

    thats the beauty of the journey.......even if there is a destination there is much to be exploered along the way.... very nice!(soup mail....)

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 6:18:00 AM

    excellent really really loved it..(that's 2 reallys ;) You have mail! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 4:56:00 AM

    Wishing you the best in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

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