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Holding On

I know this is real,
I’m spinning in circles again,

I don’t know which way to turn,
Or if I should turn at all,

Because I’m still holding on,
I never let go,

I remember the rain,
The ever-biting cold,

I fought it off through the night,
With naught but your smile in my heart,

And I’d do it again,
A thousand more times,

If you so much as hinted,
That it meant something to you…

I love you…

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  1. Date: 3/23/2010 10:32:00 AM

    you are just so good at writing poetry!!

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 8:53:00 AM

    wonderful poem here and i know i have felt this before, oh i forgot you have soupmail.

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 2:20:00 PM

    wonderfully penned! keep it up! ------Ell

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 11:57:00 AM

    This is a beautiful poem. Nicely written.

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 10:07:00 AM

    James - welcome to poetry soup. This is a lovely poem and reminds of a rainy night when my husband and I first met and we shared his umbrella. Keep up the lovely writing. Best wishes Janette