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Classical elements - 5 - metal

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Classical elements - 5 - metal


rough metal ore 

a sword traded for a pen 

wise decision 


a poet to find 

autumn night , losing his leafs 

warrior within

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  1. Date: 10/12/2009 3:18:00 AM
    "A sword traded for a pen"! Wish more would do that, Marco! Very well done choka. Thank you for your comments. Gert

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 4:51:00 PM
    excellent imagery! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 9:54:00 AM
    Very nice choka. Loved the choice of words and the imagery they evoke. Loved the correlation with poetry. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 9:40:00 AM
    Nice choka Marco, I enjoyed your element series...Raul

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 6:33:00 AM
    Pretty good poem. Pls re-entry: leaves. This is a brilliant choka, penned description. All the best.

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 3:47:00 AM
    Love this one. Keep writing. Sara