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Miserable

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Miserable

Many times I've thought of him
I can't get rid of the pain
Sulking around until someone asks what's wrong
Even my dog looks sympathetic
Right to him I wish I could go
Anyone could see my love for him
Better off dead
Love sucks when they don't love you back
Everyday is miserable

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  1. Date: 9/27/2009 7:26:00 AM
    Haha, thanks for pointing that out. How come you don't agree with the ending? Just a little confused :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 7:40:00 PM
    Acrostics are fun and you've done this one very well, Bronte even if I don't agree with your conclusion ... smile ... Your "B" line needs to change the word to "off" instead of "of" ... smile ... and then it will all be perfection. Every day here at PoetrySoup there are lots of new friends to be made ... smile ... glad you're here!