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RIVER DEEP

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RIVER DEEP

Meandering horizontally,through a wide open chasm,
Inundated to a depth you can't really fathom.
Unlike a stream,this aint no dream;
When she reaches the rapids,you'll have no chance to scream.
With undercurrents so strong and a distance so long,
To search for your remains the people will throng.
Devoid of swell or rollers,breakers and surf;
Her hydrodynamics make her queen of the turf.
Expect no gurgle or babble,a swash or a spurt;
If you dont watch out it will cause you some hurt.
Not a ripple,no surge;not the tiniest creep:
The stiller her surface....the more she runs deep.

                                              --- Princefreakasso
                                                  {Artist and poet}

P.S. This poem is dedicated to Brian Strand,
       a wonderful person and as fine a poet can be.

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  1. Date: 10/28/2009 6:59:00 PM
    Awesome! Very well written poem, striking imagery, great rhyming. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 4:17:00 AM
    Still water runs deep. So they say of the thinker. Nicely done and one to provoke thought. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 4:55:00 AM
    Hi Prince, Awesome poetry,Your tribute to Brian is just amazing. Very thought provoking.I know it meant a lot to him. It's always good to be recognized. He indeed is quite a inspiration to us all. Such a talent you are. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments on my poetry too. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 4:39:00 AM
    Prince, This is such an awesome poem. Speaks volumes about your eloquence. I'll add it to my favourites. Thanks also for your educated comments on my poem My Departed Friends that has reached the finals in the PoetrySoup Competition. God Bless You! -Mohammad

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 8:28:00 AM
    Great verse Prince,it complements Mountain High.Thank you for the dedication you made my weekend.Have a good day yourself.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 7:17:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing and giving us the pleasure of reading your splendid poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors where ever they may lead you Prince. I am sure Brian will appreciate this. You have a beautiful heart.Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 8:36:00 PM
    Sounds like a tough-act-to-beat Female... Very passionate and a lot to her... I like the description... A person, you wouldn't mind having as a friend... Good Write.. Prince

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 9:45:00 AM
    This is really thoughtful of you. Stunning, love it. By the way thanks for your lovely comments.

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 7:06:00 AM
    Excellent write, Prince! Stunning imagery! And a wonderful dedication to a great poet and friend! Ruben.