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shyness took over

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shyness took over

she say she like , i don't see it
she looks at me like i am doing wrong, but she talking to another guy
she looks at me like she sad, but i am the one hurting inside
but i can say i do like here i did take to fast in i am sorry for going so fast
my shyness took over did not know what to do or say
but an other came over in took over i can't get mad 
now she looks happy so i am done its time for me to just let go, in just say good bye
its over no more love is just not for me

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  1. Date: 9/26/2009 6:50:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing and giving us the pleasure of reading your splendid poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors where ever they may lead you. Love, Carol