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SOME MEN

HOW CAN U TELL IF HE LOVES U IF HE DON’T SHOW IT
THEY TREAT U WORSE THAN A CHILD TREATS A LUNCH KIT

TO TELL THEM U LOVE THEMUR BODY IS  SOME TIMES IN FEAR
AND IT’S JUST BECAUSE THEY DON’T CARE

AT FIRST THEY LOVE U THEN THEY CHANGE
THEY WILL TREAT U LIKE A MONKEY IN A CAGE

THEY CAN ONLY ACT THIS WAY FOR A MATTER OF TIME
OR WE CAN JUST LEAVE THEM BEHIND.





  

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  1. Date: 9/23/2009 4:12:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your heart with us today Nekeita. I wish you the best in your writing and in life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 6:49:00 PM

    Hi! In the poem The Death of Me...I discribe what I believe to be 2 past life deaths..both by drowning and yes I do believe I may again in this lifetime die from ..water...a Hindu astrologer in Nepal told me..it will get me again too...this time..water on the heart...in laymen terms an enlarged heart...seems possible aye?..... I like your verse above too! Many woman feel this way...I wrote Preciuos Fare because of similiar feelins. Please do not use ALL cap's it means you are shouting.Light Love