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Classical elements - 1 - Water

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Classical elements - 1 - Water

symbolic element 

for intelligence and wisdom 

water .. unknown depths





note : i will do all 5 natural elements 

1/ water 
2/ wood 
3/ earth
4/ fire 
5/ metal

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  1. Date: 9/28/2009 3:46:00 AM
    Interesting work here. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 8:52:00 PM
    Oh, by the way, I wanted to tell you that there are actually 4 elements, "air, water, earth and fire". Wood and metal would belong to earth I believe. Just a thought. :) Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 8:50:00 PM
    Nicely written Haiku. Interesting imagery. Had to read your poem after seeing your name and realized you are from Belgium. Although I live in california, I am originally from Belgium. I was born in Renaix/Ronse. It is nice to meet a fellow poet from the ""old country" so to speak. I will read more of your work. Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 9:05:00 AM
    This is beautiful - Onto the next element :-)

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 2:51:00 AM
    Thanks for the footnote! : ) I like its third line. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 11:30:00 PM
    another great piece.. enjoy your night! :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 10:26:00 AM
    Creative series Marco, these elements represent life...Raul