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Intercourse

The Ceiling was a Dull pastime,
But the Images I Created of
You on it, were not.

The shivers that run down My Back,
And all the way down my legs, When
I start to Believe The Images.

The Thought of you Occupying My
Sleep Space Wearing Nothing But
Flesh, Pumped My Blood... Harder

The Ease of The Sliding, Warm and
Moist. Your Eyes Always Seem to
Close as if to Accentuate the Emotion.

           - One Repetitive Movement Shouldn't -
                    - Be the Meaning of Life -

But it is...

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  1. Date: 8/24/2010 5:13:00 AM

    see what I mean a jewel and 7 reads...these folk need some mind broadening! Light & Love and thatnks for the comments on blog I've missed your pen!

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 7:08:00 AM

    The ending of this is simply perfect... but these are the lines that give ME shivers: "Thhe thought of you Occupying My Sleep Space Wearing Nothing But Flesh, Pumped My Blood... Harder." Pump the same crimson? I love it, and you Blaze.

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 12:28:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing, Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 4:36:00 PM

    there are many such moments...when your 1st child is born as you watch is such a moment! Light & Love Romeo

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 1:29:00 PM

    Very wise, very witty, oh so funny, I have not thought of the meaning of life In this way, but how true!!!!! love Simone.

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 12:43:00 PM

    It so is! Extraordinary!

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 7:04:00 PM

    Those last two lines are excellent.

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 6:21:00 PM

    sexy