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Thank God Someone Prayed

Oh
Someone
Prayed for me
When I was down
Yes, Somebody prayed…
And my God brought me out
Because someone prayed for me
I should have been gone… but Now I
Can shout, cause some one prayed for me
It was said in three days I would die
What a lie… Thank God, someone prayed for me….  



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  1. Date: 3/14/2010 5:22:00 PM

    Dear Adell, The Painting of this Poetic Tapestry is simply Beautiful Insightful Footnote Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment Today YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 8:24:00 AM

    Never mind th form,Smile! I love the thought, prayer works, God bless, Sincerely, Moses THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS, ALWAYS WELCOME AND APPRECIATED.