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A letter to a friend upon the season's change

There's a certain edge of chill in the mornings 
And the angle of the sunlight betrays the passing of the year.  
A few pioneer leaves have changed already, 
Harbingers of an encroaching winter.  
And in some odd way I am weary of wariness – 
Alert to signs and possibilities, 
A prompting to keen diagnosis 
And then fulsome plans 
Based upon some futile prognosis 
Of what to do 
And needs be done.

 
I think this time around I'm not going to try so hard 
And just let time and things unfold as they will, 
And just simply be.  
I don't have anything to prove anymore, 
The score of battles lost and won, 
Struggle endured and mistakes made 
Have been tallied enough.  
After a while it all seems to be keeping score 
Because that's what we've always done 
And how we do things.
 
It is Autumn, 
The time of fall.  So one last look back, 
Brace ourselves for winter 
And carry on.

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  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:44:00 PM

    Great visual, excellent poem!~Tammy~

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 1:06:00 PM

    Supremely writ ... great, great, great!

  1. Date: 3/12/2010 3:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on being featured this week. It is a poem worthy to be featured. So deep and thought provoking. It is a poem to be read and reread. Thanks for sharing it.

  1. Date: 3/11/2010 6:54:00 PM

    Congratulations, Mark on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 10:55:00 AM

    I like your syle and your advice. Congrats on this fine write being selected. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/8/2010 10:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Mark. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2010 6:33:00 AM

    enjoyed, congrats on the featured poem!!

  1. Date: 3/8/2010 4:57:00 AM

    Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 12:26:00 PM

    Congratulations Mark, on your feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 4:47:00 PM

    Nicely done and well worded season poem. I especially like the first paragraph. Keep the magical pen flowing. If I have not welcomed you to soup, welcome soup friend. Sara

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 3:19:00 PM

    Beautiful write here, Mark. Been awhile since you've posted here at the Soup!! Its the best thing for you in the wintertime ... Soup and writing ... smile ...

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 4:36:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Mark. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 7:21:00 AM

    There's a lot of wisdom in this poem, Mark. Winter is going to enter our lives whether we want it or not (even in the sense of aging). I really like the advice you gave your friend in the last verse..."one last look back...and carry on." It's all we can do. Great work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 7:17:00 AM

    A wonderful poem of reflection! Nicely done!! ~ Carrie