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Breaking waves

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Breaking waves

strong base ..yet so weak 

shallow water .. i now break 

no longer a wave 


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you can walk up straight , on the inside we all the same ... vulnerable 
a wave can break just in a few seconds .. just like your heart

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  1. Date: 1/27/2010 4:57:00 PM

    YEP,GOOD MESSAGE..We are all the same at Heart and Soul,as fragile as a fine bone China,teapot:) Charma

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 1:24:00 PM

    Vulnerability is a fast way to getting one's heart broken...Raul

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 10:03:00 AM

    Outstanding! I'm glad I found your poetry, Marco. Great Haiku(or Senryu?) Ruben.