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Colors

All the colors that my eyes see
Seem to become a part of me

The red that bleeds my angry days
The gray that shades my darkest ways

The forest green that brings me ease
The purple tracks left from my disease

The black that dresses my hearts delight
To my faith which is a pillow of white

All these lead me to one conclusion
The rainbow is but another illusion


Written for the first part of Sir Brian's
contest.

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  1. Date: 9/24/2009 8:58:00 AM

    Michael,thanks for for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian Looking forward to your 3rd segment .

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 5:40:00 PM

    Nice entry for the contest... I like the third couplet.. it could stand by itself.. very powerful...the forest green that brings me ease... the purple tracks left from my disease

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 8:52:00 AM

    Very nice, Michael! "The red that bleeds my angry days/The gray that shades my darkest ways" ... Terrific, my friend. Good luck in the contest...A winner in my list...Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 4:47:00 PM

    nice topic for a couplet...you have mail! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 5:22:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your heartfelt poetry today Michael. I wish you the best in Brian's contest. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:45:00 AM

    Such deep emotional perspective, my dear Michael, as only you can convey. Don't you just love these contests? I particularly love the ending. bfn, yf4l , Lainie Also, Michael, thank you for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:09:00 AM

    Great use of imagery, best of luck in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:02:00 AM

    This would be fine Michael.Yes you have got it.All contes entries received by the 7am 16th (GMT)will be eligible.My blog of the 16th will give the next theme word.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 12:56:00 PM

    Haven't checked this contest out yet but this is an interesting write you've done, Michael. Glad to see you posting!! Good luck in the contest ... smile ...

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 10:30:00 AM

    A great interpretation of the feelings associated with various colors, MJ. Nice work. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 10:25:00 AM

    Hi Michael Excellent! Straight from your beautiful heart. Good luck in Brian's contest! A winner either way. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia