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Prism

Each Friday recedes in burgundy
Bathed ardently in Luna’s kiss
         

                     But, Sunday will dawn cerulean
                     With dulcet tones of lovers’ bliss


Bearing flavors wantonly consumed
I greet each hue voraciously


                    I taste the spectrum more than I see
                    My senses piqued peculiarly


As kaleidoscopic concertos
Obscure my sight in grand array


                   Each blending shade completes the phrasing;
                   Brilliantly, prism love songs play






*For Brian Strand's "Intervals" contest.

Note: The concept for this piece was inspired by those who experience a phenomenon called 
Synesthesia.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2011 11:49:00 PM
    The depth of your vocabulary and the depth of your metaphors kaleidoscopically blended in this one, absolutely beautiful poetry.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 11:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 4:36:00 AM
    Congrats on being featured. I like this poem and what it is saying.

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 6:28:00 AM
    congrats on the featured poem!! Good work!!

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 8:37:00 PM
    Congrats Donna on your featured poem on the Soup this week .. an excellent choice..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 12/22/2009 12:03:00 PM
    Congratulations on being a first round survivor with three poemsand the best to you in the finals Donna. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 1:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poems going to second round Dona. Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:03:00 AM
    Donna, Congrats on your three poems winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 5:43:00 PM
    Another honor for this creative poem! Congratulations on having three poems make it to the finals. Wishing you the best in the next round. Karen

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 1:17:00 PM
    Three incredible poems from one awesome writer move to the second round. Great work, Golden Girl! Merry Christmas. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 10:14:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Donna >> James,xx

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 5:38:00 PM
    Oh such beautiful fluidity of words cascading into one another .. bravo Donna this is a superb write... keep at it ... thankxxx for your comments on my Heavenly Season poem... hopefully everyone knows He is all year round too.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 1:31:00 PM
    I gotta say you're very talented yourself, if this little gem is any indication. Tough phenomenon to describe; a synthesthete yourself, perhaps? If so it must be an asset to poetic imagery. Thanks for the insight in any case, and thanks for the comment. "Ur"'s one of my very oldest, and no one's ever had anything to say about it before. Best Regards, Bill Masonis

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 1:36:00 PM
    Wow, Awesome Crystalline. A flowing hyper-synchronistic rhythm from beginning to the very end. Like water molecules, flowing in a brook, over pebbles. Beautiful writing, Sincerely, Love, Moses Thanks for comments on my verses

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 11:17:00 PM
    Wow! Beautiful, artistic use of language, Donna. Thanks so much!

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 5:51:00 PM
    Hey, Congratulations on your big win!!! Great job here, Donna! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 1:33:00 PM
    Wow! This sounds like a poem that should be in a book already. It really flows beautifully and has a great sound to it. Congratulations on your win in this contest!

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 1:08:00 PM
    Donna, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 12:34:00 PM
    Congratulations Donna...a stunning poem, and well deserved win!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 9:49:00 AM
    Creative slant on the contest themes. Congratulations on being one of the winners. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

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