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sequence-SWALLOW ME,SWALLOW

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sequence-SWALLOW ME,SWALLOW

southwards
to the sun-
follow the light,
annual migration's
begun-
nomads
of nowhere,
without a care
baggage,passports or cheap
airfare

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  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:08:00 PM
    Well,...you have describe what I call,...you better take pictures of them now while they last shots !!!! *smiles* Great picture Brian !!! james

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 7:13:00 AM
    I love these lines: "nomads/of nowhere,"...mesmerizing!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:26:00 AM
    Ah! If I only had wings. Good one, Brian. Thank you for sharing. lainie

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 1:09:00 PM
    Gentle, flowing and perfect in form. I love the beautiful images it creates. It makes me want to join them in there flight. As always, thank you for your kind words and sharing. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 10:28:00 AM
    Wonderful poem Brian - i loved this one - a favorite - Could you please check my new post colors and let me know if they meet the guidelines for your new contest - as I understand you'll post two more blogs referring to the contest and then we add to this poem making one poem out of three - Is that correct? - Is your newest blog part of the contest or is it separate? Sorry for the confusion Brian - God Bless, your friend Michael

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 8:57:00 AM
    i agree with carolyn..., the "snowbirds" from up North will be flocking to Florida before the first winter chill. And many of the birds have already arrived "without a care, baggage, passports or cheap airfare." waht a great piece! love and thanks i got your soupmail

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 5:44:00 AM
    Yes, the "snowbirds" from up North will be flocking to Florida before the first winter chill. And many of the birds have already arrived "without a care, baggage, passports or cheap airfare." Delightful read! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 4:05:00 AM
    Carefree, a design of God. Of course not totally carefree but it is nice to dream on catching those currents and flying high or being a migrating fish that follows the ocean currents to the other place for another season. Nicely done in a few short words. Brings thoughts that can relax. My elevated blood pressure probably went down. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 2:36:00 AM
    "nomads of nowhere" this stuck out to me, nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 1:49:00 AM
    And Solomon in his regal garments had not their wealth. This piece made me smile, Brian! Thanks for shaing your gifts and insightS, and for your constant support. Blessings, Donna