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Parched Precipitation

He Drains the Liquid

From The Heavens, and Gulps It

From a Broken Cup.



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  1. Alseth Avatar
    Micaela Alseth
    Date: 9/10/2009 3:33:00 PM
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    This is amazing... I love the last line especially =] I love you.
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    Krista Kurth
    Date: 9/10/2009 3:09:00 PM
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    Love this senryu! Very evocative. I think we all drink grace from a broken beautiful cup. Good luck in the contest
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 9/10/2009 2:04:00 PM
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    Vivid image, Conor. Rainwater is a blessing when it has been too dry for a long time. Hope to see more of you on the Soup. Love, Carolyn

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    Michael Jordan
    Date: 9/10/2009 1:55:00 PM
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    Conor whats up - Sounds great to me best wishes in the contest - God Bless, mj
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    Date: 9/10/2009 1:45:00 PM
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    I like the alliteration in the title--captured my attention. Inspirational view. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 9/10/2009 1:22:00 PM
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    Nicely written Senryu. Keep writing. Sara


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