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Fly

Reflex arc to soar
the bird climbs higher until
the wind breaks the wing

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  1. Date: 9/14/2009 2:06:00 PM

    Beautifully poised.

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 7:21:00 AM

    Excellent Haiku Erica. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 6:26:00 PM

    Very evokative Haiku, dear Erica. Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. lainie

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 1:48:00 PM

    Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. You may want to put something in the title so people can access this easier. You can do that by editing. Enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Keep on writing! Karen