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stairs of nothing

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stairs of nothing

..         stairs
     up            of nothing
                                    wefall....
                                                   a willingness bending
beliefanddeath
                       a lonely togetherness....of scented candles and defecated dreams.
  (iyou) forsake
                       a solitary
oneness............................a tantalizing silence(encased)
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....................................................................................in receptacles of broken glass,
 
the clenching fascist ......................................................alone.

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  1. Date: 9/30/2009 4:42:00 PM
    wowser!!! "defecated dreams""the clenching fascist " harsh harsh reality...i hope it's not yours. HUGS Light & Love (and a better flight!)

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 10:59:00 PM
    Unique and clever style....A lonely togetherness ..of scented candles and defecated dreams..love this verse and the ending--Charma

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 6:47:00 PM
    Once again, you share a unique style all your own! !!

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 11:17:00 AM
    I love this line: "of scented candles and defecated dreams"... Creative presentation in this intriguing yet fascinating piece. Regarding "Be careful Hunter"...You're very close...I'm quite impressed by your sharp and quick intelligence! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 2:49:00 AM
    Interesting relationship between the idea and form. Keep writing. Sara