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Winter's Hold

the wind is chilling
the cold makes my spine shiver
harsh winter is near

the snow has hardened
i slip and slide across it
now winter is here

the blizzard gets worse
i cannot feel anything
the winter claims me

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  1. Date: 9/11/2009 6:25:00 PM

    this weather will be here before you know it...nice write!

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 4:58:00 AM

    Now isn't this just the way it happens to us for sure. Thank you for sharing now I am hibernating Savannah. See you in the Spring. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 12:56:00 PM

    Sounds cold and scary. Since in the south we are not accustomed to very much snow. I like the way that you put it together. Keep writing. Sara