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Jessica

You have left me:
Happy, spiritual, able to fly
Invincible, numb, light as a feather
Ready for the world, gracious, someone new
Generous, shaded, needed, loved
Rejuvinated, bathed, reborn, cherished
Wanted, held, comforted, warm,great...
 
You have left me:
Broke, ugly, smelly,mean
A criminal, hated, feared
Unwanted, miserable, homeless
Childless, lifeless, in the cold
With nothing, Scared, heartless
Careless, meaningless, hurting
Shacking, sick, ill, undeniable pain...

How can 1 thing
1 single thing make you feel so good yet so bad

Heroin
Most of all
You have left me dead

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  1. Date: 9/9/2009 3:32:00 PM

    they ve to leave sometimes..............making us better mortals.i luv d way u painted it.

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 5:08:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry with us today Dawn. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 8:32:00 PM

    Well contemplated and nicely written, but I dislike the question beginning with "how" at the end.

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 10:50:00 AM

    Out of the ordinary.