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once your eyes

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once your eyes

carrousel   r  c
world     i        l
          c        e
spins       s......s a d l y
a pony you sat upon.................lookingthroughme,
passing,
                 as 
yesturdaysclowns.............................................................................................................
...............................andkaliopes........echo distant...
                                                                                          ...  tents (space once filled)...
once your EyEs

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  1. Date: 9/10/2009 5:20:00 AM

    Creative!

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 12:30:00 PM

    Keep writing we will keep reading. Excellent Orphani.....o. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 6:35:00 AM

    i love your style ..different...love the ending..... echo distant ...tents..refuge--excellent--Charma

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 10:00:00 PM

    Very nice, I like the unique style...Karla