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Flames of Regrets

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Oxygen kindling never ending emotion of having lost you an ardent desperation to last beyond forgiveness
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  1. Date: 4/7/2010 1:54:00 PM

    Great tanka, Rueben! full of emotion. Thanks for contributing to the vote in my blog. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 11/7/2009 2:32:00 PM

    This poem went right into my heart.. so beautifully written, Ruben, and touched me intently..enjoy emotional expressions as u have shared this with The Soupers.. Linda-Marei, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/1/2009 7:24:00 PM

    Quite emotional and painful this one is, I feel. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing and I hope you know that I did respond to your mail. Thanks again. And please check, "Thankfully yours". Love and blessings, Caroline.

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 9:11:00 AM

    Such deep emotions in this masterful Tanka, dear Ruben. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 8:17:00 AM

    Ruben, This one really speaks to me....Jimmy M

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 8:36:00 AM

    Ruben, would you mind if I shared this with a friend who is not a Soup member? I think she's going through the feelings you describe here. Hope you are doing well! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 5:25:00 AM

    nice tanka ruben , with this i totally agree with trudy diane " You have to learn to forgive yourself before you can accept the forgivness of others " great scribe.. the emotions in this short piece running down the screen . thx for the support & welcome :) Marco

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 8:28:00 AM

    I love it Ruben nice write Jdawn

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 10:45:00 AM

    i really like this one ruben. nice work

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 11:07:00 PM

    Oh, I like this one Ruben... Short, but Very Dramatic and Showing Emotion is Searing... MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 12:17:00 PM

    sad loss, nice write, keep sharing.

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 12:00:00 PM

    Loved the title and definitely wanted to read this. You did not disappoint. I like when a poet can be passionate with any emotion whether it's happiness, sadness, or of a sensual nature. I love the grasp of holding on that the speaker has in your poem. Can you tell that I liked this?

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 7:29:00 AM

    Thrilling indeed, I loved it so much. In regard to your comment on "WaterFalls"... the TGV was exiting France not going north or south but going East away from seashores. The events of "WaterFalls" and "UnderRain" due to volcano erupting seebed causing earthquakes... causing tsunamis approaching in the future...artists' smartness of their own era shown in their valued portraits... the treasures of their homelands.

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 10:06:00 AM

    yes very powerfull Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 6:53:00 AM

    A powerful Tanka you've got here, Ruben! And thank you for warm comments...Gert

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 6:35:00 AM

    so poetic.. it's true when you lost a loved one you never had the opportunity to tell how much you love.. beautifully written.

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 9:34:00 PM

    thanks Ruben! I feel I nail it on occasion, I seem to suffer from "poets melancholy" periodically, the soup helps me keep my head above water....(in my world, I try to be strong, a lot of people count on me)

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 9:17:00 PM

    mail...

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 8:53:00 PM

    soup mail!

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 8:39:00 PM

    Lots of emotion in a few words. Very great writing. Thank you for your comments. Joyce

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 5:14:00 PM

    Wow, this is a hot write, Reuben! Excellent expression of desperation and loss. I'm getting settled in Ormond and tomorrow I get my Internet and phone service. I've missed you. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 4:11:00 PM

    Hi Ruben Everytime I re-read this outstanding Tanka, a new meaning pops into my head. So full of emotion. You express yourself very well. Bravo! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 9:37:00 AM

    Ruben, You always do it! You capture the heart and mind with words. This emotion filled poem is beautiful. Thanks for your comment on "Cornucopia" You didn't miss it! I posted it this morning. Vaya con Dios, mi amigo especial de poesia. (Smiles!) Dane Ann

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 10:17:00 PM

    I really liked this! Thx for sharing:) Erin

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 6:38:00 PM

    absolutely dead-on emotion!...fav!!!...soup-mail!

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 4:16:00 PM

    You have to learn to forgive yourself before you can accept the forgivness of others. This is a beautiful emotive poem Ruben! Thank you for your comments today also, you are good for my ego! :-) ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 4:08:00 PM

    A beautiful capture of emotion here, friend, excellent write. I took you dare, I wrote a Haiku, I need a grade on it! Lol, Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 2:41:00 PM

    Emotional healing can sometimes take a lifetime ... smile ... you've captured the pain of loss beautifully, Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 2:15:00 PM

    Tender Tanka in an emotion filled piece Ruben, wonderful write>>James

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 12:44:00 PM

    deep sad feeling of loss ---We all pass from these sad moments everynow and then..heartfelt indeed,well penned Ruben...Charma

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