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The Wedding

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The Wedding

He had brought me flowers.
roses. They were
darkest red.

Church bells tolled from behind
with golden sound;
bittersweet bittersweet.

He came to me, dressed in black;
in black with flowers
in his hand

roses. They were darkest red like
exotic dancers
adorned with crimson leaves.

A crowd was there;
people I knew
and
some were crying.

A man of God was there as
well. Reading from his book
of God. But

All I could see was him
dressed in black;
in black with flowers.

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  1. Date: 9/7/2009 1:35:00 AM
    Just need to point out that this poem is made to look nice and flowery but it's actually describing a funeral scene. It makes it all the more ironic and contrasting. this poem plays on the idea that elements of a wedding are also found in a funeral and can just as easily be interchanged

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 1:40:00 PM
    What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Gael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 4:41:00 AM
    awesome images!...jim

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 3:57:00 AM
    Very descriptive. Sara