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winter

summer flowers spend well
                                            on.all that winterforgets..............................................empty
pockets
              wornwithpride..........................theteasing  flight of BUTTERFLIES (when...
packing the toys...
...of
...children.)............................................................................................approches winter

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  1. Date: 9/3/2009 8:40:00 AM
    I love the melancholy feel, and light airy sadness of this poem, feels as if the innocence of summer is soon to be stashed away with the toys... wonderful writing, :) !!

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 4:38:00 AM
    Interesting design that took a lot of time. Quite contradictory lines. Sara