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SHE THAT WILL COME (2)

The sky will lower, the hills quieten,
and the moonlight to my window sill come,
the night she will come.

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  1. Date: 12/20/2009 6:39:00 AM

    Very impressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 9:11:00 PM

    Fantastic imagery,very nicely written.The moon will give you enough light .Good luck. Best wishes Chacko

  1. Date: 9/12/2009 5:15:00 AM

    wow this goes to my favs..indeed a gem--Charma

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 4:23:00 AM

    in the night she will come as sunrise to your dark,you re agood writer-Celina

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 4:26:00 PM

    Nicely descriptive. Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 3:42:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 3:31:00 PM

    Sweet dusk, is a surety

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 3:14:00 PM

    Lovely haiku KK