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By dquering

Am I looking to hard
To see whats in front of me
Life is so scarred
With too many penalties
Please give me enough strength to swim
Though I want drown
See the goddess within
Screaming so loud
I deserve better
In fact, the best
My thoughts in black and white
Never lay to rest
In my head, it is constant
War, battle,fight
I hate to think of it
With no resolution in sight
Maybe I deserve this
Maybe I did something wrong
This feeling I can't dismiss
Of being dragged along
Why am I here?
Better yet, why are you?
This nonsense,I can't steer
And no longer choose to
You choose your fate
as I choose mine
In this misery,I can no longer wait
You are all out of time
You will not bring me down
Not to your level
I stand on strong,loving,compassionate ground
I am God, and you, Devil

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  1. Date: 9/11/2009 9:35:00 PM

    I love a woman that can speak her mind ... this ones awesome ... congrates on being featured ... kind regards Jayne x x

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 5:54:00 AM

    This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 12:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on having your poem featured this week, Dawn! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 5:42:00 PM

    Dawn - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 12:38:00 PM

    Dawn, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 3:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 7:57:00 AM

    Congratulations, Dawn, on having your poem featured this week. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 7:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Dawn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 3:45:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup Dawn. Excellent writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 5:49:00 PM

    A little both? Lol, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 12:30:00 PM

    Interesting take. Sara