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My Celestial body and I

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My Celestial body and I

My body and I love you
My toes and feet are happy 
As they run to you

My body and I love you
My thighs and legs heat up 
At the idea of being in between you

My most private ones feel
Wonderful at the mere touch of you

My stomach and insides
Feel right about you

My heart and soul
Simply loves you

My body and I love you
My eyes ears and nose 
Are the sights sounds and scent 

That tells me that I am in love with you

My body and I love you
My head and thoughts are always thinking about you
Always thinking about you

My body and I love you
Above my veil and crown 
My physical self
You are the highest love form of love and
My body and I love you







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  1. Date: 9/8/2009 5:47:00 PM
    Now THIS is love and passion at its greatest, Mel. How lucky you are to have someone who inspires you so much and how lucky we are to have the opportunity to share your joy. Thank you! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 11:26:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Mel.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol