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Grass blades leaking green Leaves succumb to conversion Song bird is silenced ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Inspired by Brian Strands "IMAGES OF FALL " contest!

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  1. Date: 12/10/2009 1:00:00 AM
    Song bird singing'

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 7:41:00 AM
    Imaginative visual to this one Abe.. enjoyed.. and thankxxx for the comments on my poetry.. I am with u on GO DALLAS.. although the GIANTS are my fav team but I want to see Dallas win the division because I loathe the Eagles ... I am always ready for some excellent football.. wish it were on seven nights a week... if u want to read a treat posted by Carolyn Devonshire "Football Potpourri" a collaboration or "Football Follies" which I wrote this Monday after Sunday's full TV games.. luv..

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 7:30:00 AM
    Nicely done. God speed in the contest. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:24:00 PM
    The Fall in amazing describe in so few words, wonderful>>James

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 3:57:00 PM
    I love the freshness, the unusual twist of the beautiful haiku, Abe !! Excellent writing!! ~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 8/26/2009 12:57:00 PM
    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/26/2009 4:19:00 AM
    I also like "song bird is silenced"! Nice Haiku, Abe, and thanks for your comment. Gert

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 6:35:00 PM
    The first line is excelent, Grass blades leaking their lush green hue, fading into the pale yellow. Nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 12:57:00 PM
    What a brilliant way to describe the coming of fall. Outstanding write, Abe! Hope your book is coming along well. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 6:13:00 AM
    Well Abe let me say this is a fantastic Haiku to enter in Brian's contest. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 4:26:00 AM
    This is pure magic Abe..the first line is genius...wow...this is fall at its finest.

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 2:43:00 AM
    great HAIKU-------excellent---charma

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 1:31:00 AM
    Thank you for supporting my contests Abe.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 9:33:00 PM
    Nice picture, Abe. Its second line is superior! Good luck on Brian's Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 9:25:00 PM
    good job with this haiku, good luck in the contest