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painted butterflies

painted butterflies
fluttering in powder sand
beauty marks faded

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  1. Date: 9/3/2009 4:12:00 PM

    hehe thats okay.:) thankyou for the comments.

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 4:10:00 PM

    I just read the comments...Ariabelle ...I'm so sorry....I thought ...it was a girl's name!! Silly Ruben!!! I love this haiku, particularly, its second line. Good job, my friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/23/2009 6:01:00 PM

    lol thankyou. :D hehe not its not weird for it coming from a straight man. I just hope my dreams will come true and that i can be a poet :D But thanks again for the comment. Im gonna keep this style as well with my original style hope ya read more Ariabelle

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 11:54:00 PM

    :):) really enjoyed this and also loved the butterflys and the paint... weird from a straight man huh...? :) enjoy your night.

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 4:53:00 PM

    Great use of imagery for an interesting view. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Karen

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 2:33:00 PM

    thanks for the comments.:)

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 2:25:00 PM

    In the natural forms, all beauty marks fade after awhile, but I know a power thats makes all things new. Beautiful poem, good story. Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 1:18:00 PM

    Nice Haiku but sad. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 12:52:00 PM

    Lovely haiku, Ariabelle! Good job. Ruben.