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Derivation

The sun,
The Exodus:
And I awaken
Trust us, Lord
Eyes are shaken – 

Measure of tongue,
Abide thy son:
Trodden with,
Forever young.

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  1. Date: 8/20/2009 4:23:00 PM

    Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 3:32:00 PM

    Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara