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unending

dance with me in ( dreamsss
    hands pressed )
                           our lives together  
music swayed souls
                          as one
unending.................................................

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  1. Date: 8/25/2009 5:22:00 PM

    loverly waltz. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 4:40:00 AM

    i can feel this magical music-dreams hands pressed --how romantic--i love it--charma

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 10:01:00 PM

    is this a dedication to someone very especial to you dear friend?i feel like that.short but this poem speaks a lot...........unending. love,renu

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 7:59:00 AM

    so much love and feeling in these words, lovely poem

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 7:53:00 AM

    Very nicely written. I can feel the music. Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 7:35:00 AM

    Nice! Romantic piece, Orphani. Ruben.