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Heat

Heat waves shimmering
Ground hot as molten lava
Summer saying good-by

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  1. Date: 8/31/2009 12:14:00 AM

    Nice one Karla.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

  1. Date: 8/30/2009 11:39:00 PM

    Karla, i wish we had a decent summer in Scotland to say goodbye to, Heat sapping Haiku>>James

  1. Date: 8/30/2009 11:04:00 AM

    soup mail!

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 8:10:00 AM

    Good for you, Karla!! Here, in Florida, we're going to have this roasting, scalding, baking, scorching, Boiling, searing, broiling, sizzling, steaming...time during 3 or 4 more months!! : ) Great haiku. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 12:31:00 PM

    Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Enjoyed it. Karen

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 5:06:00 AM

    Excellent Haiku Karla. You told it like it is. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 4:40:00 AM

    beautiful and progressive continuity. i wait for your autumn to play with leaves.

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 7:23:00 PM

    Yes, and I am ready, I love autumn, the cool, and the pretty leaves, Sincerely Moses