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thoughts of a young mind

puppies make me cry
blood and death
create a smile
i feel no warmth 
i feel nothing
no friends 
no family
death is looking at me.

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  1. Date: 8/18/2009 5:55:00 AM

    Oh my what a sad piece you have here. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 2:53:00 PM

    Different. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 2:33:00 PM

    The persona seems hurt shattered,cold,dead,heartfelt emotions and i hope you make many friends here,youyr friend charma:)