Rorschach by Yoni Dvorkis


daver austin Date: 12/22/2009 9:45:00 AM Great idea, Yoni. Ink blots scare me to death. At my age, I see the damndest things, all probably demented. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Corinne Curcio Date: 12/21/2009 9:59:00 AM Well done - and best of luck in the contest. Congrats on your first round win
p sheart Date: 12/21/2009 8:37:00 AM Very clever Yoni, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
James Fraser Date: 12/20/2009 9:53:00 AM Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Yoni >> James
Raul Moreno Date: 11/30/2009 10:00:00 PM Yoni, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/30/2009 1:06:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Yoni. Love,Carol
James Fraser Date: 11/30/2009 10:38:00 AM Many congratulations Yoni on your win in Deborah's contest >> James
Donna Golden Date: 11/29/2009 5:46:00 PM Wonderfully creative shape, Yoni! Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna
Donna Golden Date: 8/26/2009 11:07:00 PM Brilliant shape, Yoni! Hugs, Donna
Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/26/2009 6:17:00 PM wowser..GREAT..concrete verse...I say shamrock!!!! 4 leaf clover!!! tatatadaaaaaaaaaaaah! Light & Love brainiac
Date: 8/20/2009 8:49:00 AM OM Gosh!!!! This is terrefic!!!!! Always impressed with your work... ALWAYS. Your friend w/ love, Lucinda
john freeman Date: 8/17/2009 10:12:00 PM Hi Yoni, my mind seems to be blank. The only possible image I can even slightly come up with is, maybe the bottom of a type of a vehicle, like a buggy or something of that nature. And even that takes a lot of imagination. Sincerely Moses
Karla Null Date: 8/17/2009 8:59:00 PM Very nice piece of work....Karla
john loving iii Date: 8/17/2009 3:06:00 PM rorschach made most of the movie. i felt for him but in the end..... nicely done, imaginative. John H Loving III
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/17/2009 2:37:00 PM I found so many images in this that I probably failed the test, Yoni. For some reason, I keep seeing a dragonfly and a pyramid. Really don't know what this means. Never took a rorschach test. The Christmas Cactus is the name of a specific flower. It is a cactus that has beautiful blooms that suddenly appear around Christmas. Very popular indoor plant. Love, Carolyn
Denis Joe Date: 8/17/2009 12:01:00 PM Brilliant Yoni. I found the whole hoo-hah hilarious but this is one hell of a response. The narrative (which is skillfully done) reminds me of Zukofsky, but the work as a whole is definately you and shows a great talent as well as a dedicated poet.
Date: 8/17/2009 10:48:00 AM Love the artistic format of this poem. It must have been quite a challenge to put it all together for our reading pleasure. Thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it and for taking time to comment in my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/17/2009 8:03:00 AM Good morning Yoni. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Ruben O. Date: 8/17/2009 7:48:00 AM OK, You gave me 20 minutes of joyful entertainment!! I found a heart, a ball, and an eaten apple... Original and playful, Yoni. Good job. Ruben. PS: Oblique is the key word (a glass of wine?)... Every word "works." : )
Sara Kendrick Date: 8/17/2009 1:14:00 AM Interesting concept. Keep writing. Sara
Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/16/2009 11:40:00 PM anyway you want to see them the blothches in this picture represent you, they can only symbolize thoughts that were already in your mind, all you can do is try to amke sense of them and piece this broken puzzle back together hardly an easy task--i did i just did the puzzle and its excellent,so creative Yoni and always with a message every broken puzzle in life can be fixed,like any problem-to my favs--amazing-charma

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