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brians psalm

this is not for the talkin'
but more for the walkin'

soup to be eatin'
muck and mud that's still seepin'

creepin' 

tryin' to reach the love of the deep and

speakin' a language
that's born out of anguish

power in poetry
when you hear it you know it's me

live for my father GOD
and die for the the hate in me

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  1. Date: 12/30/2010 11:27:00 AM

    There is great power in poetry, Brian. Sometimes my poems get me in trouble when people who weren't intended to see them read them and think I'm describing them. But if you life for God, any hate you think you feel will be forgiven. Thanks for your comment. You made my day! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 12:35:00 PM

    Power is poetry is something that Ive discovered. For me it is my theraphy. Trying to reach the love of the deep....another power. Like your work. Will read more. Hugss

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 4:15:00 AM

    Interesting philosophy that you have penned here in these lines. Sara

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 8:03:00 AM

    I see it the same way Brian, brothers aren't necessarily by blood alone. Family lives in love, not in genetics. I'm glad you feel similarly.

  1. Date: 11/21/2009 12:36:00 PM

    This, like the Psalms of David, speaks from your heart in truthful words that carry power for the day! Well done, Brian! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 6:48:00 AM

    Nice psalm Brian. I can almost hear it with a rap beat behind it. The last lines have that impact I can really imagine being yelled into a microphone. God is a good thing to live for and you seem to get how your own hate stands in the way of life itself. it's like you strive to reach him but all this death acts as a block on the love that's just begging to be released. if you want Him don't die for the hate but live for the love, believe me there's a world of difference. -Yoni

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 12:08:00 PM

    Much for the reader to think about here. Living for God is hope for the world. Blessings to you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 9:53:00 AM

    I missed some of the excellent poetry written and posted here yesterday Brian. I am enjoying reading them this morning. Thank you for sharing yours. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 7:37:00 AM

    Powerful piece of art brother man..the words are breathing fire in this poem..one love.

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 6:08:00 AM

    a great write my friend, talk the talk but walk the walk also a great mesage, sometimes we fall but he catches us and picks us back up to keepw alking and talking for him, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 4:21:00 AM

    awesome my friend,good to read you again--charma

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 11:08:00 PM

    I love these lines: "live for my father GOD/ and die for the hate in me"... Brilliant ! Ruben.