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Haiku - Good Day

A white day ends—
red clouds reflect
the setting sun

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  1. Walters Avatar
    Kris Walters
    Date: 9/13/2010 6:38:00 PM
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    Beauty in brevity! Lovely Haiku! You are a pleasure to read! hugs, Kris
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    Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 9/13/2010 8:19:00 AM
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    So simple but so lovely and beautiful. Great write my friend. Thanks ....Ravindra.....Hai Au Chu
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/12/2010 10:45:00 PM
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    A wonderful poem, enjoyed the great view of the perfect day coming to a close,..p.d.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/12/2010 4:56:00 PM
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    This is lovely, Hai. I think I have visited your poetry before? Anyway, nice to see you here .LUv, Andrea
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 3/4/2010 6:23:00 AM
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    I wanted to let you know..I feel I stink at this haiku form...I'm trying to work on it! I didn't even know I wasn't supposed to punctuate or capitalize or name them until a few days ago. SO, I'd appreciate all the help I can get...on my haiku it was a stinky pond in spring but a pristine skating pond in winter..I was trying to do juxtaposition & show not tell...did I?
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 2/14/2010 9:09:00 PM
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    Your haiku offers good personification. Good work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/23/2009 11:10:00 AM
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    Very descriptive Haiku, Hai Au Chu. My Haiku about the 5pointed red thing is a sweet gum tree that turns sometimes red a very dark burgundy red or sometimes yellow in the fall. It has these little round ball that contain the trees seeds and squirrels do eat them. It is suppose to tell about fall or autumn without saying the words fall or autumn. There is a contest. I am just writing some to try out . Keep writing. Sara
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    Alley Poe
    Date: 8/21/2009 6:46:00 PM
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    I don't blame the clouds at all... -Alley
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 8/13/2009 8:00:00 PM
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    Soup Mail!
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    Jessica Arteaga
    Date: 8/13/2009 7:27:00 AM
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    the sun is yelling to be still be out, poor clouds must absorb his cries till the lady moon cools them. Very nice images, o ja! answer my poetry soupers question!
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    christopher higgins
    Date: 8/13/2009 4:31:00 AM
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    This is awesome...clouds reflect anger of the setting sun..wow...well done.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/13/2009 4:02:00 AM
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    I can see the sun. Nicely penned. Keep writing. Sar
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 8/12/2009 9:48:00 PM
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    I just saw your comment...There's a new senryu posted! : )
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 8/12/2009 9:25:00 PM
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    Good day and Good Haiku!! Hai, your great with "Hai"kus! : ) Have "another" wonderful day! Ruben.


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