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Character

Light of day
brings
a visitor.

Magnificent, 
grey-haired 
bastard
from 
nowhere
but here.

Banters at me,
"There is a
plan for you."

With hands spread
illustrates,
"From birth
to death..."

Pauses
and waits 
for me.

Then in revelation,
"and in between..."

Comes the promise,
"is life."

And at the end of day,
he goes
setting with the sun
to the other side of night.

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  1. Date: 10/14/2010 6:07:00 PM

    Hi, Hai~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 10:32:00 AM

    Yep- this one blew me away too. As I scrolled down, it was like reading a novel...waiting for the explosion of the climax.

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 4:12:00 AM

    This one Blew my tongue away=) And i wear white sockx cs they stand out from all the black soxc=p and when they get dirty i get to wash them so i never have stink sockx**ace**

  1. Date: 8/13/2009 5:03:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing with us today Hai. May the sun shine on you today making your heart joyful. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 7:51:00 PM

    Too much to think about it... It taste like riddle! Thanks for the entertainment!! Very well penned, Hai! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 6:24:00 PM

    Feels like I would watch some travel to be caught up to meet someone bewitching, shows him odd tricks and reaches his life, but then he he mysteriously as he came, very interesting, could be a story in many ways